Number 28

It was a normal sunny day. The birds were tweeting and people talking loudly. It’s my birthday today and I don’t know what to do. So instead I called my friend Paige to come celebrate my birthday with me. “She said okay I will be there at 1:00pm.” So I got out of bed and went to the kitchen to go make me some breakfast. Then help mum and dad clean the house up. Then I got ready for the day and waited for her to come. Time went past. It was 12:00 and going on 1:00. I was so sad. She wasn't going to come. So I decided to celebrate it by myself. With a red velvet cupcake with vanilla frosting and a candle on top. Then I made a wish. I wish there was a big giant robot in our city. It was the next day. Bird tweeting and people talking loudly. I could hear big stops and the ground was shaking. OMG. there is a big giant robot. To be continued…..

recognise how advertisements use persuasion.

WALT : Identify and use key information from the text to write a summary.

5 Fun Experiment

Task Description : The is my reading task for this week. There is 5 experiment. 1. Float or sink. 2. Pepper on the run. 3. Dancing oobleck. 4. Rainbow in a jar. 5. Sparkly volcano. We had to watch a video and write what they are going to be doing, and what they needed and seeing if it true or false.

School Hour Persuasive

Introduction:

What does persuasive mean? Well today I’m going to be showing you what persuasive means. Today we are writing about ( School Hours Persuasive ) 

( School hours should be long or short ) Some schools start school earlier and end school late but how many hours do they get everyday at school for learning. 

Statement :

We should start school early. Same school in different countries all around the world should start whenever just like point England school. What time do you start school?

Explanation :

Have more time to learn :

If we don’t learn you would not get good grades and a good education. If you do learn you not be able to read or write.

We need to go to school so we could spell words, read words and say words.

Have more time with friends and peers :

Everyone could learn each other's names.  Maybe you could play with them and get to know them better. You  can cooperate with each other.

Get help from the teacher when you can’t work a problem out.

You need help from a teacher or else you won’t get your work done and properly. You need to cooperate with your teacher. You need a teacher to you with your work.

Conclusion : 

Trying to find out what the word persuasive means?

This is my school hours persuasive writing. When do you start school early or late. I think everyone should go to sleep early or late. What does persuasive mean to you?

Task description : This is our writing about ( School Hours Persuasive ) for this week. We had to write a persuasive writing about our school hours. We should  start school late and finish early or whether school should start early and finish late. But what does the word Persuasive actually mean?

What is a scientist

WALT: write a persuasive paragraph.

Task Description :What does it mean to be persuasive? As a class, we are going to spend some time exploring this. We had to write about persuasive writing. what does persuasive writing mean to you? persuasive writing is an argument, is a piece of writing which the writer uses words to convince the reader that the writer opinion is correct with regard to an issue.

Persuasive writing.

Task Description: This is my persuasive writing presentation and we had to chose 1 or 5
statements. I chose statement number 1. If you are sick you should stay home from school. what would you do if you wrote this is a persuasive writing.