Kia ora Kia ora Nevayah. I'm a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like this blog post because I like the way you designed and how you made it look. Maybe you could say bit more about whats it about so it can be a bit more clean, but apart from that I really like it
Hello Nevayah, I'm Nikita, I really think your blogpost is creative, and the lion king part was quite humorous. All I probably need to say you should add is a bit more writing in other parts explaining, and maybe even telling the readers where the images such has the lion king are from?
Kia ora Kia ora Nevayah.
ReplyDeleteI'm a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like this blog post because I like the way you designed and how you made it look. Maybe you could say bit more about whats it about so it can be a bit more clean, but apart from that I really like it
Kind regards Grace.
Hello Nevayah,
ReplyDeleteI'm Nikita, I really think your blogpost is creative, and the lion king part was quite humorous. All I probably need to say you should add is a bit more writing in other parts explaining, and maybe even telling the readers where the images such has the lion king are from?
-Sincerely Nikita-