Hello Nevayah, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked your writing because I had a clear picture in my head but I was wondering why you did this, like did you just want to do it or was it something that you had to do? The description that you added was very clear and you describe things well but you did have a few errors which you could fix but apart from that you did an awesome job. After I read this, I searched Skeleton Coast up because I didn't know what it was and I was pretty amazed from the photos that I saw especially like the ship wrecks and the bones. Why did you pick Skeleton Coast if you had to describe something? Awesome work!
Hello Nevayah, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked your writing because I had a clear picture in my head but I was wondering why you did this, like did you just want to do it or was it something that you had to do? The description that you added was very clear and you describe things well but you did have a few errors which you could fix but apart from that you did an awesome job. After I read this, I searched Skeleton Coast up because I didn't know what it was and I was pretty amazed from the photos that I saw especially like the ship wrecks and the bones. Why did you pick Skeleton Coast if you had to describe something? Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your next posts,
Parwin